VO & PI's - Bachelorette 9 - Discussion

I thought Desiree says 'I've never felt SO loved'.

california90 wrote:VO of "Desiree is my dream girl" is Kasey - compare the two "Desiree" in his voice over (the other one is the secret one)

Also, I'm not entirely sure.. but the VO of Des saying "I never thought this could happen" (pans over her crying).. wasn't there an ITM in another promo where she's in tears of happiness? Like she said that she never thought this could happen.. meaning the opportunity? Just a thought.

Good points california90! Yeah he says Desiree in a unique way.

OMG..thanks for this JBF! you rock!

i just need to leave a little comments :

- the scene when Chris was carrying Des, i believe it is taken from their solo date, not from a RC scene in mansion. The outfit she was wearing when they were dancing seems to match the scene when Chris carrying her.

- your line :Chris VO: I’m as in love as I’ve ever been / On date with Mike G.----THIS IS NOT Chris`s VO. JMHO

- i am guessing im in love with Des is Brooks`s VO

- i agree with you on the rest of Chris`s VO

keep up the good work JBF...you are amazing...

california90 wrote:VO of "Desiree is my dream girl" is Kasey - compare the two "Desiree" in his voice over (the other one is the secret one)

Also, I'm not entirely sure.. but the VO of Des saying "I never thought this could happen" (pans over her crying).. wasn't there an ITM in another promo where she's in tears of happiness? Like she said that she never thought this could happen.. meaning the opportunity? Just a thought.

yup..it is the same VO as in the first promo....(happy tears!)..

Also, you forgot the line: 'I'm in love as I've ever been'.

atem wrote:Also, you forgot the line: 'I'm in love as I've ever been'.

it already addressed by JBF,atem. but i think saying it is Chris`s VO is Wrong....

murasaki1393 wrote:

california90 wrote:VO of "Desiree is my dream girl" is Kasey - compare the two "Desiree" in his voice over (the other one is the secret one)

Also, I'm not entirely sure.. but the VO of Des saying "I never thought this could happen" (pans over her crying).. wasn't there an ITM in another promo where she's in tears of happiness? Like she said that she never thought this could happen.. meaning the opportunity? Just a thought.

yup..it is the same VO as in the first promo....(happy tears!)..

Tomfoolery I tell ya! OK… update… we will just keep making new versions…

Line by Line… the promo with ____ for stuff that still needs filled in.

Don’t be shy. Make many corrections here so it can be updated.

Every seasonal promo is the same (these editors are in a rut) with their three distinct parts:

(Part 1: Living a Fairytale)

First shot is Desiree and Drew in Barcelona
Desiree VO: I never thought / shot dancing at night with Chris
Desiree VO: … this would ever be my life / Yacht scene with her shouting “Welcome to Madeira boys!”
Desiree VO: Picture, like, the best dream… / concert with Chris
Desiree VO: … you ever had / beach with Chris… “Look at where we are right now”
Desiree VO: … and times that by ten / Shot of her kissing Drew (probably Madeira)
Desiree VO: … and then living it. That’s where I am. / German Alpine aerials shown
Brooks and Des raising arms up on mountain. “It’s so beautiful!”
Brooks VO: Desiree’s the type of girl I can easily fall in love with / Munich shot
____ VO (probably an early dumpee on night #1): Desiree is one in a million / helicopter and ocean scene with Chris
Brandon (shown partly): I don’t think she knows how beautiful she is. / Des & Brooks on wedding date 1 on 1
Desiree VO: I am the luckiest girl alive / hot tub with Bryden
With Brooks on his first date “Yeah, this is awesome”
Kasey VO: Desiree is my dream girl / fireworks with Brooks “Wow”
Desiree VO: Who knows where this journey is gonna go… but this is something I will never ever forget. / embracing Chris on beach

(Part 2: Dark Drama Center)

_____ VO (probably spoken on night #1 by an early dumpee): There will definitely be some confrontation / stunt western date & dodgeball date
_____ VO: I will f*** you up / Brooks injured on the dodgeball game
Drew to off-camera Ben? (shirt sleeve matches another scene of his): You are not here to fall in love with Des!
Personel VO: System [edit] down / somebody attacking Brooks in Atlantic City suite.
Misc. VO “What the hell is that?” / mock fight with Bryden and ___ with ____ watching / another VO: This is not right!
James to Desiree: He *bleep* hits me out of left field
Ben kissing Desiree
Ben VO: I don’t care if every guy hates me / Mike G., followed by Ben shown “I’m definitely here to win this competition”.
_____ VO: He has a girlfriend / Mickey T.
_____ VO: How does that even happen? / Mike G. with injured thumb
Mike G VO: He’s the kind of guy who… (camera pans on Brandon and Brian in group) … is thinking about his second and third wife on his first honeymoon (Ben with a rose)
Ben shown: I’m not here to make enemies
Juan Pablo with James sitting by: I heard the opposite
Ben VO: This is going to be working out better in my favor / Ben with Des, followed by shot of Zak W.
Ben shown: I love watching you smile / kissing scene with Des
Ben shown: These guys are dumb
Mike G. VO: He chose the wrong person to lie to / James shown first, then Ben
Brian’s girlfriend arrives with Chris Harrison
_____ VO: At this point, it’s about to go down
Mike G. VO: That’s his girlfriend / Bryden and Brandon looking out the window
Zak W. shown, then James saying “It’s gonna get real”
Girlfriend crying: Why did you do this to me?
Chris Harrison: You are not telling the truth
Desiree VO: He’s disrespecting women / Kasey contemplating
Girlfriend shouting: You are a lying, cheating, and deceitful pig!
Kasey VO: Desiree needs to know those things that were said in secret behind her back / Des walking at night
Zack W. VO: James said / James shown
Zack W. seen with Mike G.: you place the cards a certain way, he’s gonna come out the next Bachelor
Desiree to James: James, will you accept my rose? I will
Mike G VO: She’s gonna know exactly what happened / Des kissing James
Mike G VO: She’s gonna be crushed / Drew standing
Kasey shown: When this *bleep* this will erupt. This will absolutely erupt
Mike G. shouting at James: I would never have made those comments that you made on that bus! (Chris shown listening.)
James shouting back: That’s not what I said! / camera pans on Kasey shaking his hand AshLee style in disgust
____ VO: He’s a Cancer (if talking about James or Kasey shown… that is correct. Both have birthdays in July… LOL!)
James VO: This is a big deal / Chris shown
Mike G. shown: Why did you say that?
James You are putting words in my mouth! / Kasey listening as Mike G. says “He heard this”
Chris shown: Everyone sees through his s***
Mike G. responding: You thought you were outsmarting everyone!
James shown: I can’t even f***ing take this s***
Following black-out and doom score, Desiree is sitting with some “informant” with hand on face “I don’t think I can handle it right now”
James VO crying: It was worse than I thought it would be. What can I say to make it better? / shown with head down
Mike G. VO: This is not something she is ever going to get over / shot of depressed Desiree
Desiree VO: I have never felt like / Brooks rubbing his face
Desiree VO: anyone has loved me as much as I loved them / crying with V-necked in blue ______
Likely James VO: It makes me feel sick to my stomach. I feel so bad for her / Brad head down
Desiree VO: I don’t deserve to be heart broken / Brandon crying
Zak W. VO: I pray that she can continue to be her sweet self / Desiree crying
Zak W. VO: … and hope her fear doesn’t get the best of her / James, Drew and Kasey together
Desiree seen: I almost resent the guys for putting this on me / shot at boatyard (Madiera?)
Mike G.: This is the worst possible scenario / Desiree with head down and church cross in the distance with VO “I never thought this could happen”

(Part 3: Culmination of Our Happy Journey… with a touch of tomfoolery at the end)

Aerials of the German mountains.
Drew? VO: I don’t want her to lose faith in the good guys who are here / Des with Brooks on mountain “Wow”
Brooks to Des: The moments of having something that takes your breath away for a second makes you focus on what’s important
Drew to Des on hometown date: I’ve never had this feeling with anyone, like, it’s like you’ve known me my entire life.
Des kisses Bryden with a “I trust you now”
Zak W.??? VO: I feel like this is a chance to have a new beginning / Des kissing gray suited guy ____
Desiree VO: Because of what I’ve been through… / With Drew in Barcelona
Desiree VO: … I did gain a lot of clarity / with Brad in Atlantic City with sand castle
Desiree VO: You do bring out the best in me / Taking her and Chris’ photo in Munich
Desiree VO: I think at this point I can trust / helicopter at beach date (possibly Chris) and kissing Chris in water silhouetted
Desiree VO: …all of them / church in mountains (Is “them” the guys or different religious beliefs as if that was an “obstacle” her season?)
____ VO: I’m as in love as I’ve ever been / On date with Mike G.
Brandon to Des: I’m never going to hurt you
Chris VO: This is the girl I could be with for the rest of my life / Chris and Des eating in Munich, kissing in snow, followed by shot in Atlantic City amusement park with James
Chris VO: I can honestly say that I am one of the luckiest men alive / With Brooks watching fireworks, with Drew in Barcelona (flash-shot)
Zak W. VO: This is the best I’ve felt in many many years. / With Chris on fantasy date boat (three shots)
With Brooks on his first date, she says “this is so awesome”
Desiree VO: Love is something everyone should feel / Kissing Drew in Barcelona
Desiree to Brooks walking: Look where we are right now.
Desiree VO: I knew I was always deserving of it but… / Brian carrying her, followed by shot of Des kissing Drew (Madeira)
Desiree crying in red outfit: I never felt myself loved
Drew VO: I’ve been waiting my entire life for this moment / Shots of her running with Bryden
____ VO: I’m in love with Des / Chris dancing with her

First promo in episode #1

Desiree: Picture, like, the best dream you’ve ever had and times that by ten and then living it. That’s where I am.
Kasey? VO: This is something you literally dream of / with Brooks and fireworks “Look at where we are right now”
Brooks VO: Desiree is the type of girl I can easily fall in love with / with Chris on beach & later “this is amazing” on Madeira boat
Kasey VO: When she walks in, the air gets sucked out of the room, so to fall in love with somebody like Desiree is kinda dream come true / Desiree in Munich, geyser on Chris’ date, Des kissing Drew in Madeira, Des and Brooks near Hollywood sign “This is awesome”
Desiree VO: I want love at the end of this and I want it to last / Hollywood sign
Des and Brooks shouting “We are on Cloud 9”
Desiree VO: The way I feel right now / with Drew in Barcelona
Desiree VO: I am so hopeful that everything / with James, followed by aerials of Germany
Desiree VO: But I think my biggest fear is for it all to come crashing down / Des by fireplace
____ VO: The door opens and it is Chris walking in with another woman / we see the visuals as guys look on
Brian’s girlfriend in her angry red: You told me you just needed time to yourself for things sorted out
Desiree is in orange comforting somebody
Brain’s girlfriend: You’re a lying, cheating deceitful pig!
Kasey shown looking down
Desiree is crying with VO “I never thought this could happen”
Kasey VO: When Desiree walked in, I thought for sure his ass was going home
____ VO: He should have left. He knows who he is / Ben smiling
Chris speaking “This is a big deal”
Mike G. VO: I’m going to tell her what a fraud Ben is / shots of him, Ben and Mike calling out “I never would have made the comments you made” as Ben smiles. “You are outsmarting everyone”.
Ben: I’m going to sleep with one eye open tonight.
Kasey VO: Things are definitely starting to heat up / two silhouettes behind window (James & Ben?)
Kasey VO: There will definitely be some confrontation / Desiree following Brooks and camera crew into room, then James shown
Brooks to James: Any chance I am gonna take a stab at you, I am going to take it
James: What you guys did tonight was so ****ing wrong. So wrong. / Brooks looks on
Kasey VO: This will erupt. It will absolutely erupt. / Drew sighing in his pink shirt, followed by silhouetted guys outside window (possibly James and Ben)
James attacks Brooks
Mike G. VO: He chose the wrong person to lie to. / Brooks after dodgeball game in hospital
James to Des: He ****ing hits me out of left field and it is like ‘what the f***!”
James? VO: This is not right! / somebody with purse escorting a contestant out, looks like Kasey
Mike G.: Why did you say that?
James’ head is down
Drew: She’s gonna know exactly what happened. / followed by shot of Desiree crying in boatyard
Stunt date shown with Bryden and somebody “fighting”
____ VO: System down / Des crying with mystery V-neck in blue guy
Drew VO: It kills me to know that this would happen. I don’t want her lose faith in the good guys that are here.
Desiree VO: This is the ultimate risk. Putting my life out there and my heart out there. / Desiree inside Palau Maricel
Brooks to Des (mountains scene Pico do Arieiro): The moments of having something that takes your breath away for a second makes you focus on what’s important
Desiree VO: Y’know, the good, the bad, the ups and downs… / Chris helicopter date, Brad with her on NJ beach
Desiree VO: This is the moment I’ve been waiting for / Des and Mike G. riding carriage in Madeira
Drew to Des in Madeira: This is one of the happiest days of my life. I’ve I’ve fallen for you.
Desiree VO: After tonight, / dancing with Chris
Desiree VO: I want him down on one knee because I love him / hot-tub with Bryden
Desiree VO: I knew I was always deserving of it but I never felt myself loved / kissing Drew in Barcelona

Doesn't a lot of Desiree's VO seem to be from either when she was cut from Sean's season or when she was doing the PI when she first got to the Malibu house, etc with the 'Imagine you are living your dream, etc' stuff?

Many think two key lines in Sean's promo were borrowed from Emily's season... and at least one of hers from Brad's season. In fact, the one particular sentence in her promo... forgot off-hand... matched word for word a line used on her wine-country solo date with Brad. Yeah, it is possible these are recycled quotes. Add to this the criticism that Sean received for his sounding very rehearsed and scripted, particularly when discussing "seeing myself spending the rest of my life with her" and such related lines. These made his critics doubt he was that sincere about finding a wife. (Nate Hartsock wasn't convinced apparently.)

However, these folks are hardly Shakespeare and repeat themselves constantly. We even saw how Sean battled AshLee at WTA over what he may or may not have said OFF camera. These leads are very, very, VERY cautious in front of the camera, fearing the wrong wording will get them attacked.

I am guessing Desiree uses "I never thought this could happen" both when happy and upset.

Des: "After tonight, I want him down on one knee. I love him, and I always knew I was deserving of it, but I've never felt so loved."

:pinkaw:

sanlee088 wrote:Des: "After tonight, I want him down on one knee. I love him, and I always knew I was deserving of it, but I've never felt so loved."

:pinkaw:

I know! Desiree is too cute. Now, we know that date is when she's wearing that red dress!

Guys...there is a VO in the preview where someone says "this is way worse than I thought it would be. And there is nothing I can say to make it better". That actually sounds like Brooks to me. Start at 2:09 in the video.



Thoughts?