VO & PI's - Bachelorette 9 - Discussion

BKay wrote:I'm not sure where to put this, but I guess this will work, unless Love or San wants to move it.

This is the 'script,' I guess you could call it, of the preview and sneak peek from last night. Tptb are magicians at splicing and dicing!

Preview at end of Epi 6:

Des: [vo - helicopter over the water and small island] My fairytale is having a man by my side that [vo - chris and des in helicopter wearing headsets, smiling at one another] loves me and who never gives up.

Man: [vo - des and drew on horseback w sea in background] Look at this!

Des: [vo - des in front of kayak paddling, chris behind her] I’m going to just trust my [vo - brooks behind des holding her at castle w fireworks light] heart and know that [vo - transition to fireworks] my heart will find what it needs.

Des: [vo - des and chris from rear walking to bow of boat] *Yells* and laughs

Des: [vo – des and michael on street] He’s everything I’ve [vo - des and michael in toboggan] ever needed in my life.

Man: [vo - chris and des laughing, sitting on sand, her in green bikini] Des is the woman I’ve been [vo - des and chris lying on sand at water’s edge] waiting for.[vo - shot from above, two people walking on sand away from helicopter] I know we have a future.

Des: [said to Michael, appears to be after F4 RC. She is in turquoise dress, he’s in dress shirt and jacket.] You’re so passionate. You’re so loving and caring.

Des: [vo – des and drew at picnic table at shirley heights] I love everything about him.

Des: [vo – des and brooks walking w picnic basket to mtn] That is amazing.

Zak: [jaw moves, we don’t see words, he kisses des] I love you.

Des: I just wanna [vo - break in phrase, des and chris? running in water] give him the world.

Man: [vo - des and chris on bow of boat in swimwear, kiss] This is perfect.

Man: [vo - des and brooks kiss, sitting on blanket on mtn] I fall [drew speaking, on orange sofa, lime curtains] more and more in love with you [vo - des and drew kissing at shirley heights] [vo- des and michael from rear walking down rock sidewalk] every day.

Des: I’m there [vo - des and chris kissing, sitting on beach] and I’m his [vo - des and chris in water playing w stingrays] and I want to spend the rest of my life [vo - des and brooks sitting close on mtn, distant shot] with him.

Des: [vo – des and drew kissing, street and street lamp visible] I love this man. [vo - brooks and des on mtn top yelling unintelligible to me]

Des: [vo - des and chris kissing at devils bridge] It’s the love that I always knew existed.

Des: [vo – des and drew kissing in hotel room – galley bay] I feel complete.

Drew: [ vo – des supposedly looking at him, listening] I didn’t see this happening.

Drew: [drew speaking, supposedly looking at her] It’s not something you control, it just happens.

Des: [vo – des crying, mouth not saying words we hear] For once in my life, I was [vo – des’ hand in shot and drew looking at her] hopeful. *crying*

Des: The only thing that’s kept [vo – des crying, drew looking at her, her mouth doesn’t match words] me here is you. *crying*

Des: [vo – words don’t match mouth, des and drew hugging, she rubs his back] I’ve always loved the wrong people. (I’m pretty sure we heard her say this either last season or in her opening pkg)

Des: I  ca__(?) [obvious splice, then Des speaking, looking supposedly at drew] 100% for you.

Drew: [speaking] It’s just never gonna work.

Des: [vo – des walking down verandah dock in flowy top, white shorts] *crying.* You know I don’t wanna [vo – des sitting on end of dock] love anyone if they don’t love me the same.

Des: [des speaking in PI in room] It breaks my heart.

CH: [ch speaking at st annes] Where do we go from here? [ch voice, des looking down, dressed for F3 RC] You know, where do you wanna go from here?

Des: [vo – des crying, hand to face w tissue] I know what I deserve and I don’t deserve to be heartbroken.

Michael:  [vo] [brooks in blue tshirt opens door] [brooks outside, looks upset, puts hands to face] I just did not [chris in blue dress shirt looking down, sad] at [brooks shoulder, des w hand to face crying] all expect this. [des in turquoise dress watching suv drive away]

Des: [vo – des turns away from street walking away from where suv just left] I was hoping to meet someone I could share my life [brooks in blue tshirt, pacing, looking upset] with.

Brooks: [lips are moving, but are the words the same?] It’s the worst day in my life.

Michael: [vo] [man in long sleeve blue shirt holding ring] I feel like my heart just exploded in my chest.

Des: [des in red dress in hotel speaking, crying] I never felt like [vo – des outside, crying, boats in background, same as next scene w chris] completely loved.

Des: [Des speaking, crying] I’m sorry. [vo - chris in light gray suit, looking hurt] *whispers* I have to go.

Zak: [zak speaking, in gray suit, dark tie, blue shirt, Des crying, part of her face in shot] I’m just, I’m just completely shocked.

Brooks: [vo – brooks side and back, hands to his face, pacing] There’s nothing I can say. *crying*

Man: [vo – des from rear in white dress w silver or gold design, limo pulling away from curb] unintelligible *I was making*?

Brooks: [vo – brooks hand to mouth, looking down] ayh

Man: [vo] [zak wearing suit in limo] What the hell just happened? [michael wearing jacket in suv] [brooks wearing blue tshirt in limo ]

Chris: [speaking, wearing suit in limo, rubbing eyes] Oh man.

Des: [vo – man crying, up close shot of his upper face, eyebrows, head down to hand] Honestly for me it’s over.

Des: [speaking, hand to forehead, crying sitting in hotel, wearing turquoise flowy top] I just wanna go home. *crying*

Sneak Peek during Mistresses:

Des: [vo – brooks in striped sweater, light blue jean shirt underneath pulling chair out for des, wearing dark taupe silky shirt] I have always felt strongly for Brooks.

Des: [speaking in PI] I could definitely see him as the one.

Des: [speaking to brooks] I want to make sure, you know, that you WANT me to meet your family.

Brooks: [speaking]Yea, um.

Brooks: [speaking in PI, in striped sweater] I’ve introduced a lot of women to my family

Brooks: [vo – brooks at table looking down] uh, that’s just something I take [des looking sad or strained] seriously.

Brooks: [vo – des looking strained] and I still have questions, ya know? Like

Brooks: [brooks in PI – in an off white shirt. Obvious splice in sound] I want to really be honest with her,

Brooks: [vo – brooks at table, then pans to des at table. Another obvious sound splice] ya know, we’re not on the same page.

atem wrote:I think the original is right and he said he introduces a lot of women to his family.

BKay wrote:I'm not sure where to put this, but I guess this will work, unless Love or San wants to move it.

This is the 'script,' I guess you could call it, of the preview and sneak peek from last night. Tptb are magicians at splicing and dicing!

Preview at end of Epi 6:

Des: [vo - helicopter over the water and small island] My fairytale is having a man by my side that [vo - chris and des in helicopter wearing headsets, smiling at one another] loves me and who never gives up.

Man: [vo - des and drew on horseback w sea in background] Look at this!

Des: [vo - des in front of kayak paddling, chris behind her] I’m going to just trust my [vo - brooks behind des holding her at castle w fireworks light] heart and know that [vo - transition to fireworks] my heart will find what it needs.

Des: [vo - des and chris from rear walking to bow of boat] *Yells* and laughs

Des: [vo – des and michael on street] He’s everything I’ve [vo - des and michael in toboggan] ever needed in my life.

Man: [vo - chris and des laughing, sitting on sand, her in green bikini] Des is the woman I’ve been [vo - des and chris lying on sand at water’s edge] waiting for.[vo - shot from above, two people walking on sand away from helicopter] I know we have a future.

Des: [said to Michael, appears to be after F4 RC. She is in turquoise dress, he’s in dress shirt and jacket.] You’re so passionate. You’re so loving and caring.

Des: [vo – des and drew at picnic table at shirley heights] I love everything about him.

Des: [vo – des and brooks walking w picnic basket to mtn] That is amazing.

Zak: [jaw moves, we don’t see words, he kisses des] I love you.

Des: I just wanna [vo - break in phrase, des and chris? running in water] give him the world.

Man: [vo - des and chris on bow of boat in swimwear, kiss] This is perfect.

Man: [vo - des and brooks kiss, sitting on blanket on mtn] I fall [drew speaking, on orange sofa, lime curtains] more and more in love with you [vo - des and drew kissing at shirley heights] [vo- des and michael from rear walking down rock sidewalk] every day.

Des: I’m there [vo - des and chris kissing, sitting on beach] and I’m his [vo - des and chris in water playing w stingrays] and I want to spend the rest of my life [vo - des and brooks sitting close on mtn, distant shot] with him.

Des: [vo – des and drew kissing, street and street lamp visible] I love this man.

Des and Brooks: [vo - on mtn top yelling, arms raised in air] We're on cloud nine!

Des: [vo - des and chris kissing at devils bridge] It’s the love that I always knew existed.

Des: [vo – des and drew kissing in hotel room – galley bay] I feel complete.

Drew: [ vo – des supposedly looking at him, listening] I didn’t see this happening.

Drew: [drew speaking, supposedly looking at her] It’s not something you control, it just happens.

Des: [vo – des crying, mouth not saying words we hear] For once in my life, I was [vo – des’ hand in shot and drew looking at her] hopeful. *crying*

Des: The only thing that’s kept [vo – des crying, drew looking at her, her mouth doesn’t match words] me here is you. *crying*

Des: [vo – words don’t match mouth, des and drew hugging, she rubs his back] I’ve always loved the wrong people. (I’m pretty sure we heard her say this either last season or in her opening pkg)

Des: I  ca__(?) [obvious splice, then Des speaking, looking supposedly at drew] 100% for you.

Drew: [speaking] It’s just never gonna work.

Des: [vo – des walking down verandah dock in flowy top, white shorts] *crying.* You know I don’t wanna [vo – des sitting on end of dock] love anyone if they don’t love me the same.

Des: [des speaking in PI in room] It breaks my heart.

CH: [ch speaking at st annes] Where do we go from here? [ch voice, des looking down, dressed for F3 RC] You know, where do you wanna go from here?

Des: [vo – des crying, hand to face w tissue] I know what I deserve and I don’t deserve to be heartbroken.

Michael:  [vo] [brooks in blue tshirt opens door] [brooks outside, looks upset, puts hands to face] I just did not [chris in blue dress shirt looking down, sad] at [brooks shoulder, des w hand to face crying] all expect this. [des in turquoise dress watching suv drive away]

Des: [vo – des turns away from street walking away from where suv just left] I was hoping to meet someone I could share my life [brooks in blue tshirt, pacing, looking upset] with.

Brooks: [lips are moving, but are the words the same?] It’s the worst day in my life.

Michael: [vo] [man in long sleeve blue shirt holding ring] I feel like my heart just exploded in my chest.

Des: [des in red dress in hotel speaking, crying] I never felt like [vo – des outside, crying, boats in background, same as next scene w chris] completely loved.

Des: [Des speaking, crying] I’m sorry. [vo - chris in light gray suit, looking hurt] *whispers* I have to go.

Zak: [zak speaking, in gray suit, dark tie, blue shirt, Des crying, part of her face in shot] I’m just, I’m just completely shocked.

Brooks: [vo – brooks side and back, hands to his face, pacing] There’s nothing I can say. *crying*

Man: [vo – des from rear in white dress w silver or gold design, limo pulling away from curb] unintelligible *I was making*?

Brooks: [vo – brooks hand to mouth, looking down] ayh

Man: [vo] [zak wearing suit in limo] What the hell just happened? [michael wearing jacket in suv] [brooks wearing blue tshirt in limo ]

Chris: [speaking, wearing suit in limo, rubbing eyes] Oh man.

Des: [vo – man crying, up close shot of his upper face, eyebrows, head down to hand] Honestly for me it’s over.

Des: [speaking, hand to forehead, crying sitting in hotel, wearing turquoise flowy top] I just wanna go home. *crying*


Sneak Peek during Mistresses:

Des: [vo – brooks in striped sweater, light blue jean shirt underneath pulling chair out for des, wearing dark taupe silky shirt] I have always felt strongly for Brooks.

Des: [speaking in PI] I could definitely see him as the one.

Des: [speaking to brooks] I want to make sure, you know, that you WANT me to meet your family.

Brooks: [speaking]Yea, um.

Brooks: [speaking in PI, in striped sweater] I haven't introduced a lot of women to my family

Brooks: [vo – brooks at table looking down] uh, that’s just something I take [des looking sad or strained] seriously.

Brooks: [vo – des looking strained] and I still have questions, ya know? Like

Brooks: [brooks in PI – in an off white shirt. Obvious splice in sound] I want to really be honest with her,

Brooks: [vo – brooks at table, then pans to des at table. Another obvious sound splice] ya know, we’re not on the same page.